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Some people feel that manufacturers and supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of goods. Others argue that customers should avoid buying goods with a lot of packaging. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#people #manufacturers #supermarkets #responsibility #amount #goods #customers
One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is
packaging
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the packaging
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 of products. It is undeniable that
amount
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 of packaging has become an essential part of our
life
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.
However
, there is no absolute agreement on
should
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whether should
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 manufacturers reduce the amount or
customers
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if customers
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 select
by
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it. A commonly held belief is that managing the amount of packaging should be
by
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producer's
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. As evidence of
this
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 they point to they should give more attention to ecology by environmentally friendly package.
In addition
, nowadays, there are a huge number of packages, which were manufactured by recycling. In could be explained by the fact that by using
these kind
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 of wrapping they are able to kill two birds with one stone. From
first hand
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, increasing the significance of recycling. From second hand, make a shorten the number of
ecotrash
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eco trash
eco-trash
.
As a result
, it leads to
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raise
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rise
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the
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 popularity of eco-products.
On the other hand
, some people claim that customers should sort
products
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the products
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what
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that
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 they buy.
For instance
, they may mention that if consumer prefers more ecologically friendly things,
then
, customers will do
less package
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fewer packages
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due to
 the fact of without anyways for presenting items.
In addition
, the
merchandises
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merchandise
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 with more wrapping will
less
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be less
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 trendy between buyers. The explanation lies in
tha
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the
 fact that first of all the main purpose
for
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of
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fabricator
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the fabricator
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 -- fast sell it.
Therefore
, if
consumer
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the consumer
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 will change
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their preffered
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preffered
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preferred
 charastericsfor
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the product
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product
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products
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 -- it will show
influence
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 on craftsmen. In conclusion, taking everything mentioned into account I would argue that attention should be from both.
Thus
, consumers should select products by
this
 factor,
while
,
manufacturer
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manufacturers
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 should make a maximum to reduce eco trash.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Sustainability
  • Eco-friendly
  • Carbon footprint
  • Excessive packaging
  • Biodegradable materials
  • Corporate social responsibility
  • Consumer advocacy
  • Environmental stewardship
  • Waste reduction
  • Recycling initiatives
  • Green practices
  • Minimalist lifestyle
  • Resource conservation
  • Sustainable consumption
  • Packaging alternatives
  • Regulatory measures
  • Ethical choices
  • Environmental impact assessment
  • Renewable resources
  • Compostable packaging
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