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The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.

The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.
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The given chart shows that Indonesia
raised
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 stable every year. And in the
future
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 it would
be raise
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be raised
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 by
predictions
.Thailand
approximately
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has been
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 standing on one level all the years, but at the start of 2030 it
gonna
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is going to
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 be
extrimely
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extremely
 raise in peop;
e
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the
 population in cities.Malaysia raising only up for each year,
include
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including
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 the future
predictions
.
Philippines
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The Philippines
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the
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is the
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 most unstable
compare
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compared
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 to other countries. The statistics that
shows
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show
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 Malaysia and Indonesia
looks
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same
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the same
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to
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as
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 each other, they
are
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both had
uncertain
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an uncertain
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 start and after 1990,(40% and 20%) had
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an extremely
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extremely
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raise
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rise
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 in
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the percantages
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percantages
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percentages
percentage
 of
population
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the population
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 in cities. And both their
predictions
shows
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show
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 that in the future they
gonna
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are going to
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 only mount. Thailand after every
raise
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rise
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 in 20 years, goes to stable
to
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for
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 the next 30 years, based on
diagram
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the diagram
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. After the big rise in
1990
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1990,
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 the statistic went stable until 2020. Phillipines at the start had the biggest rise
compare
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compared
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 to other countries , but went down sharply till
the
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2010. And after
that
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that,
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 it was slowly going up, and
according to
predictions
 it is 
also
 going only
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Vocabulary: Replace the words predictions with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compare" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • graph
  • percentage
  • population
  • Asian countries
  • living in cities
  • 1970
  • 2020
  • predictions
  • 2030
  • 2040
  • introduction
  • overview
  • trend
  • body paragraph
  • compare
  • predicted percentages
  • summarize
  • closing statement
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