The graph below shows the amounts spent on cloths on the internet in the USA and japan between 1999 and 2003

The

linegraph

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line graph

illustrates how much money

spent

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on online

clothe

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clothes

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shopping from 1999 to 2003 in the USA and Japan.

Overall

, in the

year

1999

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1999,

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Americans spent more on online shops compared with their

Japanese

counterparts.

While

in the

year

2001, figures for Japan were slightly higher than

the

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USA, and

finally

, in 2003 expenses

on

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for

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clothing were equivalent for both countries.

To begin

with, in the

year

1999, Americans spent around 10

million

dollars

on online stores,

while

Japanese

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the Japanese

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spent half of

this

amount.In 2002, figures for both saw a rise, but the amount of cash spent by

Japanese

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the Japanese

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doubled, and reached 10

million

dollars

,

whereas

the number for Americans was around 12

million

dollars

. In the

Year

2001, trends for the USA and Japan were declining and fell

down

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to approximately 6

million

dollars

and 7

million

dollars

respectively. Between 2001 and 2002, American and

Japanese

residents purchased more items for their wardrobes, and

furthermore

, lines for both saw a significant rise, and kept on rising until 2003, and peaked at 20

million

dollars

.