The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
A glance at a line graph provided reveals the figure of outbound
tourists
to three various sectors in a European nation, measured in thousands, from 1987 to 2007. Overall
, the
most foreign visitors flocked to the coast place Correct article usage
apply
while
the mountain was a sector that had a fever of tourists
.
Starting from exactly 40,000 visitors the data declined slowly to merely 35,000 in 1992 before accelerating dramatically to nearly 85,000 in 2007 which reached its peak at. Meanwhile
the annual number of Add a comma
Meanwhile,
tourists
to the mountain ranged from 20,000 to 30,000 visits after a fifteen year
period of time before climbing marginally to approximately 28,000 Add a hyphen
fifteen-year
tourists
in 2007. Although
the lake was a
sector with the fewest Correct article usage
the
tourists
in 1987, it had the highest cross-border
Correct quantifier usage
number of cross-border
tourists
in 2002. Launching from 10,000 visitors before growing exponentially to 40,000 in 1997 and peaked at nearly 76,000 in 2002 after that it was a significant deterioration to exactly 50,000 in 2007.Submitted by nh203618 on
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