TASK 1: The diagram below shows the process of growing and preparing pineapples and pineapple products.

TASK 1: The diagram below shows the process of growing and preparing pineapples and pineapple products.
The illustration presents an overview of the key state involved in the manufacturing of pineapple products from raw ingredients called preparation, processing and delivering. The whole process of pineapple production starts when each plant is exposed to
sun
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from 28 to 30 degrees in order to allow it to be naturally dried, after 7 months fruits become bigger and chemicals are added
with
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apply
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a
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apply
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view
to
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that
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them can reach 2
kilogram
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kilograms
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and tall 30
centimeters
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after 5 months.
After
this
particular stage has finished, they are washed in water to remove any undesirable dirt that remains on
pineapples
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the pineapples
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and divided into three groups.
Following
this
,
large size
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fruits are coated with wax and delivered overseas by boats.
Although
medium and small size pineapples have removed their tops and peeled rinds, they are separated from different products.
While
the former
are
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ground in an extractor machine so as to make juice, the latter are
cutted
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cut
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to turn them into smaller pieces and packed in cans.
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