The planets population is reaching unsustainable levels and people are facing shortage of respurces like water and food. To what consequences may over population lead? In your opinion what measures can be taken to fight over population

It has been widely discussed that

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world has been overpopulated by

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many life-supporting resources are depleted.

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manufacturing

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has damaged the

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to the extent that it may become inhabitable and a global consensus is needed to regulate manufacturing

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. The problem with overpopulation is the manufacturer’s abundant leftovers that exceed the

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’s carrying capacity.

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, the resource

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vital to humans is endangered caused

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by-products that can not be integrated into the natural process,

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these compounds become pollutants that damage the

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.

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, the air is polluted by

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dioxides that are overly produced

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of manufacturing

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.

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,

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abundant material can not

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in the natural cycle because deforestation has destroyed many trees which is the nature’s tool to transform

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dioxide into oxygen.

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, those residues add extra materials that damage the

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the extra

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dioxide, that we discussed earlier, creates a glass-house effect

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responsible for the global warming phenomenon. To fight the effect of overpopulation is to live in accordance with the natural cycle of resources. With

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in mind, manufacturing

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has to put environmental sustainability as a priority.

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a global consensus is required to put strict contraining regulations

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manufacturing departments for operating more than the

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’s capacity to carry.

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any factory will be required to be responsible for minimizing the

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that affect the

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, creating a standard amount of

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dioxide

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produced by any factory can halt their aggressive business expansion and take time to explore alternative ways of operating. In

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way, humanity will adapt to harmonize its epoch with the effort to sustain nature so it can stay habitable.

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, the overpopulation problem comes with aggressive goods production

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its leftovers damage the planet. In response to

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problem, we have to create a global consensus to regulate

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activity

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that,

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, can encourage a global movement to change the way people live to be more harmonized with the way nature works.