The planets population is reaching unsustainable levels and people are facing shortage of respurces like water and food. To what consequences may over population lead? In your opinion what measures can be taken to fight over population

It has been widely discussed that

this

world has been overpopulated by

Human

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thus

many life-supporting resources are depleted.

The human’s

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manufacturing

activity

has damaged the

environment

to the extent that it may become inhabitable and a global consensus is needed to regulate manufacturing

activity

. The problem with overpopulation is the manufacturer’s abundant leftovers that exceed the

environment

’s carrying capacity.

Furthermore

, the resource

that is

vital to humans is endangered caused

by

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many

manufacturer’s

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manufacturers’

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by-products that can not be integrated into the natural process,

therefore

these compounds become pollutants that damage the

environment

.

For instance

, the air is polluted by

carbon

dioxides that are overly produced

as a result

of manufacturing

activity

.

Moreover

,

this

abundant material can not

be proceed

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in the natural cycle because deforestation has destroyed many trees which is the nature’s tool to transform

carbon

dioxide into oxygen.

Consequently

, those residues add extra materials that damage the

environment

whereas

the extra

carbon

dioxide, that we discussed earlier, creates a glass-house effect

that is

responsible for the global warming phenomenon. To fight the effect of overpopulation is to live in accordance with the natural cycle of resources. With

this

in mind, manufacturing

activity

has to put environmental sustainability as a priority.

Therefore

a global consensus is required to put strict contraining regulations

to

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manufacturing departments for operating more than the

environment

’s capacity to carry.

Thus

any factory will be required to be responsible for minimizing the

byproduct

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byproducts

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that affect the

environment

.

For example

, creating a standard amount of

carbon

dioxide

that is

produced by any factory can halt their aggressive business expansion and take time to explore alternative ways of operating. In

this

way, humanity will adapt to harmonize its epoch with the effort to sustain nature so it can stay habitable.

To sum up

, the overpopulation problem comes with aggressive goods production

that

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and

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its leftovers damage the planet. In response to

this

problem, we have to create a global consensus to regulate

this

activity

that,

furthermore

, can encourage a global movement to change the way people live to be more harmonized with the way nature works.