The graphs of the plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs of the plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two maps illustrate Southwest
Airport
in its current form and its proposed expansion.
Overall
, there will be extensive developments with regard to facilities and the
number
of gates in the
airport
. There are no plans to change the passport control section.
According to
the maps, the most noticeable change from the current layout to the proposed plan is that there will no longer be a walkway in the northern part and will be replaced by a sky train in
this
part for both arriving and departing visitors.
Also
, the north of the
airport
will be expanded, and the
number
of gates will increase from 8 to 18.
Moreover
, the section related to check-in and café will be replaced by the bag drop and check-in part, respectively. The
number
of cafés will rise to 2, which will be situated in the southwest and east.
In addition
, there are other variations related to the
airport
. The
number
of entrances and exits will double.
Also
, shops and
ATM
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ATMs
show examples
will be built in the north of the security passport control and the southeast, respectively.
Furthermore
, a new place will be constructed in the southeast for hiring the car.
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