The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
These tables illustrate the
sales
of bananas and coffee which are Fairtrade-labelled in five different countries situated in the Europe in years
of
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1999 and 2004. Here, the UK showed a sharp
inclinement
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incline
in coffee
sales
and Switzerland in the
sales
of Bananas, as well. Only Sweden and Denmark faced a decline in bananas. All other
contries
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countries
witnessed an
inclinement
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inclement
incitement
in both of the products. The UK sold €1.5
million
coffee
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in 1999
whereas
the stood at €20
million
in 2004. They topped that year. Switzerland
were
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able to double
their
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its
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sales
. Denmark, Belgium and Sweden faced a little bit
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of inclinement
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inclinement
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inclement
with €0.2
million
, €0.7
million
and €0.2
million
respectively.
On the other hand
, Switzerland stood first in 2004 for banana
sales
. Their revenue increased
about
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€32
million
. The UK stood at €5
million
in 2004 from €1
million
in 1999.
In addition
, Belgium showed a good growth of €3.4
million
.
Furthermore
, Sweden and Denmark faced a loss of €0.8
million
and €1.1
million
respectively compared to the
sales
of
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from
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1999 to 2004.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fairtrade-labelled
  • sales figures
  • percentage increase/decrease
  • European countries
  • sales volume
  • notable trend
  • exponential growth
  • moderate rise
  • marked decline
  • comparative analysis
  • economic factors
  • consumer preferences
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