Some people think that secondary school should add international news as a subject; others think that it is a waste of valuable time. Discuss both views.

People have different views about adding global
news
as a module whilst others believe it is a waste of
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precious
time. Universal
news
has an advantage for
students
for having
knowledge
about what is happening in the world . To some
extent
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it
strain
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students
due to
high
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demanding
courses
.
To begin
with, worldwide
news
provides current information about what is happening .
This
promotes
knowledge
to
students
and they can learn from that.Take
for
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example, the
news
broadcast culture, economies, science and technology, politics, war, health, law and different aspects of life. One
student
can be
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with
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this
will lead the
student
to focus more on that certain subject. To add
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to
this
, global
news
is very educating in all
courses
for instance
in
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module. Pupils can link their essays
like
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Russian
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the Russian
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and Ukraine
war
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wars
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. In
health
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the health
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aspect ,
school
children can learn through
news
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the news
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especially
Covid-19
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the Covid-19
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pandemic and how they resolved it. in
this
case
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it will be a positive advancement for high
school
student
to take part
of
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international
news
because it boost their
knowledge
to
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of
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their subjects .It can
also
sharpen their mind to have a vision
to
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what they want to specialise
on
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in the future
due to
the
news
story
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stories
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of different countries.
Conversely
, global
news
can be a burden to
students
. in high
school
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school,
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there are many modules that are
complusary
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compulsory
and a
student
can not afford to drop. So to add another course
it
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apply
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strains ,
no
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time to rest and
cannot
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balance all the
courses
which
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can lead to failure. Another issue is some
students
may not be willing to learn about global
news
because they are into national
news
which makes them
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lessons in
school
or not
concetrating
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concentrating
. In
this
case, pupils do not like to have more bunch of subjects because they will not study in peace which will lead to stress, anxiety and no social life
hence
destroying their career. In conclusion, high
school
student
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students
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must add universal
news
as a course because it
aqcuire
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requires
knowledge
and more information in
positive
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a positive
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way. On the other side, it may be
waste
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a waste
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of time because of many
courses
that are already there and
this
may affect a
student
's quality of life.
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