You are part of a group of musicians who meet on Tuesday and Friday evenings to practise in the community hall. You have been told, however, that it is no longer possible for the group to use the hall. Write a letter to the manager. In the letter: describe what the group does explain why the group is good for the community suggest alternative days and times for practice You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Mr. Brown, I am writing to discuss alternative options for our music group to continue using the
community
hall for regular practice sessions. Recently, we have started our music group - The Royals and we demonstrate classical music in a unique way
while
keeping the usual traditions. We have regular performances held at the City Town Hall where a wide range of people join our event.
In addition
, weekly two of our performances raises donation for the
community
charity which supports poor children with their illness. Our show is being attended by many individuals and
this
helps us to raise a good donation amount.
This
directly contributes to the development of our
community
. We understand that practice on Tuesday and Friday is not possible as they will be used for
community
meetings and group activities.
However
, as an alternative, we would like to use Thursday and Monday during the afternoon session from 12.00 p.m. to 2.00 p.m. We believe during
this
time, the hall will not be occupied with any event or activity. I look forward to your reply. Yours Sincerely, Kunj Soni
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Ensure that all the points mentioned in the prompt are addressed in the letter.
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