Some people think that teachers should be responsible for teaching student to judge right and wrong and to behave well. Some say that teacher should only teach students about academic subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Some believe that it is the responsibility of a
teacher
to help students learn judging of right or wrong and behave properly
while
others believe a
teacher
should focus on academic teaching only.
This
essay will argue that
teacher
is not professional
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moral education given no training or examination for qualification but
teacher
, as
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role model in school, their responsibility should not be limited to
knowledge
sharing.
Teacher
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educated in teaching school with certification
on
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professional
of
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knowledge
teaching,
however
, there is no subject about
ethic
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education nor examinations. In
this
point of view, it is hard to confirm
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judgement shared by a
teacher
is
align
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to
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the social standard or
fullfill
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fulfils
the social moral expectation. Criminal related to educator is not a rare case being reported in social media.
On the other hand
, school
as
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the reflection of society and
teacher
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teachers
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being
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are
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the role
model
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models
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and key
influencer
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influencers
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. All
by
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all,
teacher
affecting
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affect
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their students.
Therefore
, if a
teacher
only
consider
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the passing of academic
knowledge
, but
ignore
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ignores
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the
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behavior and critical thinking, the moral standard of a society
maybe
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may
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collapsed
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or difficult to be
maintained
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. There is a statistic
shows
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that the criminal rate of a city
raised
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if
number
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a number
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of
youth related
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crime
case
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is high,
while
the solution of preventing
this
problem is educating the young people with strength
their
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ethic
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ethics
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and
improve
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their conduct.
Teacher
, with no doubt, is the first line of
defense
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. To summarize, education should cover both hard
skill
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skills
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and soft
skill
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skills
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,
that is
academic
knowledge
and moral
behavioral
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behaviour
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respectively.
Hence
,
teacher
should not limit their job aspect
on
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lesson teaching but should
concern
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be concerned
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about how their students behave by showing them how to judge
the
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right and wrong.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • moral values
  • ethics
  • character development
  • academic knowledge
  • teaching methodologies
  • curriculum
  • critical thinking
  • intellectual growth
  • discipline
  • responsibility
  • life skills
  • decision-making
  • behavioral issues
  • conflict resolution
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