The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The pictures below depict the changes that are going to happen in the university's sports centre after redevelopment. There are two of them that show the present and the future layout. A great development is illustrated in the future plans which is going to create many extra parts when the previous indoor sections will remain almost the same.

However

, the outdoor courts are planned to be replaced by a leisure pool on the west side next to the former changing

room

Also

, at the east of the center a sports hall will be located beside the seating and the Gym will expanded.

In addition

, two divided dance studios will be constructed at the northeast corner which will be near the new dressing

room

alongside a cafe. When attendees enter the building, they will be able to buy their necessities from a sports shop by turning left and

at the end

of the path another new changing

room

will be available.

To sum up

, despite all of the modern features that are schemed for

further

design, the reception, seating part, and changing

room

that surrounds the 25m pool are going to be kept without any changes.

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