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Caring for children is an important thing of the society. It is suggested that all mothers and fathers should be required to take childcare training courses. To What extent do you agree or disagree ?

#children #society #mothers #fathers #childcare #courses
Owing to modernization, pampering the
new borns
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 is crucial for the community. In the notion here, it is mentioned by some
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conservationists
conversationalists
 that the
parents
 of children
needs
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 to be informed well on what should they really do and for
this
 purpose proper classes should be arranged on childcare. I strongly agree
on
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 the
above mentioned
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 view that
parents
 should take childcare courses. To commence, the foremost reason for
this
 statement to be valid is that couples who are expecting their first
child
 have
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 excitement level on
highest
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 scale and they must be naive without experience to handle
such
 a huge responsibility.
However
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 educating the
to be
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parents
 can help them endure and tackle some not only difficult but
also
unknowing
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situation
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 with
the
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child
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children
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.To
examplify
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exemplify
 the recent reports on
new born
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child
 suggest that
parents
 usually stresses away even in the simplest complications just because of unsatisfying education for childcare. Adding to
this
, there are certain places around the world where superstitions are deeply rooted in
the
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society and that can indirectly deteriorate
a
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 infant's state of wellness. As
such
locality
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 is away from education there are
heart wrenching
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 incidents of
unproper handeling
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improper handling
 of infants in any case of
health related
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 circumstances. For
an
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instance times of
india
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 recently mentioned
about
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an event where
infant's
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an infant's
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 heath got worse with time as the
parents
 thought they already treated their
child
by
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 some homemade remedies.
To conclude
, educating the guardians and
parents
have
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plethora
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 of benefits that cannot be ignored.
Besides
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 there is not a remarkable downside to
this
 suggestion and following reasons like getting
parents
 to know about childs' condition and proper methods to look after their newborn, I totally stand on my perspective to totally agree
to
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 the notion.
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