Some people feel that the government should pay the costs of running universities so that a university education will be free for anyone who wants it. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Some

people

may argue that

government

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should not provide funding for

universities

, as

government

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the government

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should spend it on

the

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other facilities

such

as public transportation or medication

instead

.

However

, the advantages that society might receive from the

government

giving budgets to schools can yield far outweigh these disadvantages, the most noteworthy of these benefits

being

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how they can give opportunities to those who cannot afford

universities'

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universities

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courses and how they can improve individuals'

quality

of life. Providing budgets to colleges can reduce the number of

students

that

could not

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cannot

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afford the

universities

' courses, so they have a chance to study. As

financial

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the financial

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stability of each family is not

as

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equal to each other, some

of

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teenagers have to abandon their dreams to study

in

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universities

because their families cannot support them.

For example

, in Thailand, the majority of

students

have , as of late, been dumped out of

educational

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the educational

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system

due to

poverty, resulting in

students

cannot find jobs as they do not have certifications from

universities

to help confirm their abilities in working.

This

shows that if

government

provide money for

institues

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institutes

, it would encourage

students

to have a chance to study again. Alongside

this

, giving funding to schools can help improve

people

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people's

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quality

of life.

As receiving

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a good

quality

of education can help

people

to have more chances in seeking for their careers, so it can help evaluate

people'

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lives.

It is clear that

all of

this

can happen if not only the

government

support funding to

universities

. In conclusion, providing money to

universities

might seem to waste

money

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of money

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, though its merits that it can benefit the

students

who cannot afford application

fee

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fees

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and better

people

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quality

of life are perhaps most important. If not only the

government

but

also

individuals in society help support

this

, the country will develop in a

good

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better

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way than it used to be.