Some people feel that the government should pay the costs of running universities so that a university education will be free for anyone who wants it. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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people

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may argue that

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government

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the government

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should not provide funding for

universities

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, as

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the government

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should spend it on

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other facilities

such

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as public transportation or medication

instead

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.

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, the advantages that society might receive from the

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giving budgets to schools can yield far outweigh these disadvantages, the most noteworthy of these benefits

being

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how they can give opportunities to those who cannot afford

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universities'

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universities

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courses and how they can improve individuals'

quality

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of life. Providing budgets to colleges can reduce the number of

students

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that

could not

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cannot

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afford the

universities

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' courses, so they have a chance to study. As

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the financial

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stability of each family is not

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apply

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equal to each other, some

of

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apply

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teenagers have to abandon their dreams to study

in

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at

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universities

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because their families cannot support them.

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, in Thailand, the majority of

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have , as of late, been dumped out of

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the educational

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system

due to

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poverty, resulting in

students

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cannot find jobs as they do not have certifications from

universities

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to help confirm their abilities in working.

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shows that if

government

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provide money for

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institutes

, it would encourage

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to have a chance to study again. Alongside

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, giving funding to schools can help improve

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people

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quality

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of life.

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a good

quality

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of education can help

people

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to have more chances in seeking for their careers, so it can help evaluate

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people'

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lives.

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all of

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can happen if not only the

government

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support funding to

universities

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. In conclusion, providing money to

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might seem to waste

money

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of money

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, though its merits that it can benefit the

students

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who cannot afford application

fee

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and better

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people

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quality

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of life are perhaps most important. If not only the

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but

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individuals in society help support

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, the country will develop in a

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way than it used to be.