Today, many people do not know their neighbors in large cities. What problem does this cause? What can be done about this?
Nowadays,
majority
of Correct article usage
the majority
people
are living in urban area
. They live in a housing estate which is beside together. Fix the agreement mistake
areas
However
, they do not identify their neighbors associated with they don’t
care about this
relationship. This
problem
causes many disadvantages. Hence
, some measures need to be applied for solving
Change preposition
to solve
this
problem
.
The reason for causing problem
is that Add an article
the problem
people
now are living in the
world which is operated busily. Correct article usage
a
In other words
, people
just concentrate on their achievement
and developing themselves to success. Fix the agreement mistake
achievements
Therefore
, they don’t
need to spend much time for
meeting or greeting some Change preposition
apply
people
who live beside them. For example
, young
generation Correct article usage
the young
realize
their polity with someone because they often go back home Change the verb form
realizes
lately
and leave home early for Change the word
late
working
. Change the form of the verb
work
Hence
, they don’t
have enough time to establish new relation
with anyone. That Replace the word
relationships
make
them decrease their social skills Change the verb form
makes
such
as communication, creativity, etc. Furthermore
, they will create a distance between them and others. As a result
, not only they don’t
know what other’s name, but also
they can’t identify other
face.
Correct article usage
the other
However
, some people
considered
that Wrong verb form
consider
this
problem
need
to be tackled. One of them is that the authorities can financially support some open places like coffee shops, restaurants, or even supermarkets to create several charming spots for locals. These places thereby becoming common and familiar for Change the verb form
needs
people
to come and share about their happiness and sorrow within a group. Another way is that people
can together celebrate parties or feasts at one's house every weekend, then
they could take turns to become hosts and thus
, everyone can know where each individual live
and even more things.
In conclusion, if Replace the word
lives
people
cannot know their neighbor
, Change the spelling
neighbour
this
make
society will be distempered. Change the verb form
makes
Thus
, spending a few
time to greet Correct quantifier usage
little
neighbor
really available for us.Fix the agreement mistake
neighbors
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