The flow chart illustrates the consequence of deforestation. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

The flow chart illustrates the consequence of deforestation. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
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The flow chart depicts the consequences of heavy tree-cutting. It is clear from the chart that deforestation can be caused by various reasons.
According to
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what is shown, heavy equipment for logging can
cause
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soil compression, after that the soil becomes hard and that might
cause
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rainwater to run off and
as a result
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, floods will occur. When cutting trees in a heavy manner the number of roots will decrease and
this
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will
cause
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the soil to degrade and pioneer species will get into the sand that will destroy it.
Also
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, deforestation will increase the chance
for
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of
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wildfires, wastes will accumulate, less microbes
feeding
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on wastes, and
as a result
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,
this
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will
cause
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a disturbed ecosystem.
Moreover
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, fewer trees mean less moisturized air in the atmosphere which will
cause
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less rain fall and high drought.
To sum up
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, we could say that tree cutting could
cause
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many problems which include: Flooding, less biodiversity,and
lastly
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less precipitation that will
cause
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drought.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "as a result".
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words cause with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • flow chart
  • consequence
  • deforestation
  • process
  • cutting down
  • loss
  • forest cover
  • wildlife habitat
  • disruption
  • ecosystems
  • soil erosion
  • water quality
  • release
  • carbon dioxide
  • atmosphere
  • contribute
  • global warming
  • climate change
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