The flow chart illustrates the consequence of deforestation. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
The flow chart depicts the consequences of heavy tree-cutting. It is clear from the chart that deforestation can be caused by various reasons.
According to
what is shown, heavy equipment for logging can cause
soil compression, after that the soil becomes hard and that might cause
rainwater to run off and as a result
, floods will occur. When cutting trees in a heavy manner the number of roots will decrease and this
will cause
the soil to degrade and pioneer species will get into the sand that will destroy it. Also
, deforestation will increase the chance for
wildfires, wastes will accumulate, less microbes Change preposition
of
feeding
on wastes, and Wrong verb form
feed
as a result
, this
will cause
a disturbed ecosystem. Moreover
, fewer trees mean less moisturized air in the atmosphere which will cause
less rain fall and high drought.
To sum up
, we could say that tree cutting could cause
many problems which include: Flooding, less biodiversity,and lastly
less precipitation that will cause
drought.Submitted by osama2010b on
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