The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.
The bar chart compares the information about the
percentage
of people
who visited fast food
restraunts
with different frequency in 3 various Correct your spelling
restaurants
years
. Overall
, the percentage
of people
who prefered
to go to fast Correct your spelling
preferred
food
restaurants every day
amounted to less than 5 %, whereas
the percentage
of people
who ate in the same type of restraunts
once a Correct your spelling
restaurants
week
was more than 25% in all three years
.
It can be seen that,
the lowest Remove the comma
apply
percentage
of people
visiting fast food
restraunts
over the given period was for those who went there every Correct your spelling
restaurants
day
and for those who never went there. In 2003, those who ate fast food
every day
amounted to 4%, whereas
those who never ate in fast food
restraunts
comprised 5%. In the remained Correct your spelling
restaurants
years
, the percentage
of junk food
restraunts
’ Correct your spelling
restaurants
every
Correct your spelling
everyday
day
visitors was approximately 3%, however
, the number
of people
who never visited the same type of restraunts
was higher Correct your spelling
restaurants
for
1%.
The highest Change preposition
by
percentage
of people
who visited fast food
restraunts
several times a Correct your spelling
restaurants
week
amounted to 20% in the year 2006. 7 years
later, the number
of fast food
consumers declined by about 4%. In 2003, those who consumed fast food
with a frequency of a few times a year was around 13%, however
, 3 and then
7 years
later, indicator
of consumers increased to 15%.
31% of Correct article usage
the indicator
people
ate fast food
once a week
in 2003. After 3 years
, this
indicator slightly increased and then
by 2013 decreased to around 27%. The number
of those who preferred to visit fast food
restraunts
once or twice a month in 2003 was almost similar Correct your spelling
restaurants
with
those who visited once a Change preposition
to
week
in the same year. In contrast
, the number
of those who ate fast food
once or twice a month in 2006 was lower than of
those who ate Correct pronoun usage
that of
such
food
in 2013.Submitted by shakhusmanhaqq on
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