The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.

The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food

restaurants between 2003 and 2013.
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The bar chart compares the information about the
percentage
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of
people
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who visited fast
food
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restraunts
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restaurants
with different frequency in 3 various
years
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.
Overall
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, the
percentage
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of
people
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who
prefered
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preferred
to go to fast
food
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restaurants every
day
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amounted to less than 5 %,
whereas
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the
percentage
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of
people
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who ate in the same type of
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restraunts
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restaurants
once a
week
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was more than 25% in all three
years
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. It can be seen that
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the lowest
percentage
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of
people
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visiting fast
food
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restraunts
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restaurants
over the given period was for those who went there every
day
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and for those who never went there. In 2003, those who ate fast
food
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every
day
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amounted to 4%,
whereas
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those who never ate in fast
food
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restraunts
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restaurants
comprised 5%. In the remained
years
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, the
percentage
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of junk
food
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restraunts
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restaurants
every
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day
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visitors was approximately 3%,
however
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, the
number
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of
people
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who never visited the same type of
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restraunts
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restaurants
was higher
for
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1%. The highest
percentage
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of
people
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who visited fast
food
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restraunts
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restaurants
several times a
week
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amounted to 20% in the year 2006. 7
years
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later, the
number
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of fast
food
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consumers declined by about 4%. In 2003, those who consumed fast
food
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with a frequency of a few times a year was around 13%,
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, 3 and
then
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7
years
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later,
indicator
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the indicator
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of consumers increased to 15%. 31% of
people
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ate fast
food
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once a
week
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in 2003. After 3
years
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,
this
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indicator slightly increased and
then
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by 2013 decreased to around 27%. The
number
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of those who preferred to visit fast
food
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restraunts
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restaurants
once or twice a month in 2003 was almost similar
with
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to
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those who visited once a
week
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in the same year.
In contrast
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, the
number
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of those who ate fast
food
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once or twice a month in 2006 was lower than
of
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that of
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those who ate
such
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food
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in 2013.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, whereas".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, people, food, restraunts, years, day, week, number with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fast food consumption
  • Frequency
  • Dining trends
  • Demographic factors
  • Peak periods
  • Downward/upward trend
  • Lifestyle choices
  • Nutritional awareness
  • Economic impact
  • Health implications
  • Convenience foods
  • Eating habits
  • Statistical evidence
  • Year-over-year comparison
  • Fluctuation
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