The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the monthly movements in change of
prices
for copper, Use synonyms
nickel
and Use synonyms
zinc
in 2014. Use synonyms
Overall
, it is evident that levels fluctuate throughout the Linking Words
year
, and the price of Use synonyms
nickel
experienced the most dramatic decrease throughout the Use synonyms
year
, Use synonyms
however
, all the figures were around
Noticeably, the Linking Words
prices
of Use synonyms
Nickel
dropped significantly starting from Figure 6, which surpassed other metals and resulted in being the lowest Use synonyms
at the end
of the Linking Words
year
with the variable of 1. Use synonyms
Moreover
, the decline consisted of two bigger low points in June and October, of -3 and -2 respectively. Linking Words
Similarly
, in those months the Linking Words
prices
for Use synonyms
zinc
experienced a minimum point of -1. Use synonyms
Although
Linking Words
zinc
started as Use synonyms
being
one with the lowest price at the beginning of the Unnecessary verb
apply
year
, despite the fluctuation, it surpassed all other metals in December.
When it comes to the monthly changes of copper, those remained relatively stable throughout the Use synonyms
year
, Use synonyms
however
, slightly dropping from 2 to 1.5. The metal started as being in between two other Linking Words
prices
, Use synonyms
although
, during the period between June and the middle of October, it surpassed Linking Words
nickel
and copper in Use synonyms
prices
before Use synonyms
zinc
took its place as a leader.Use synonyms
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "although, however".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words prices, nickel, zinc, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "change" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
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