The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The line graph illustrates the monthly movements in change of
prices
for copper,
nickel
and
zinc
in 2014.
Overall
, it is evident that levels fluctuate throughout the
year
, and the price of
nickel
experienced the most dramatic decrease throughout the
year
,
however
, all the figures were around Noticeably, the
prices
of
Nickel
dropped significantly starting from Figure 6, which surpassed other metals and resulted in being the lowest
at the end
of the
year
with the variable of 1.
Moreover
, the decline consisted of two bigger low points in June and October, of -3 and -2 respectively.
Similarly
, in those months the
prices
for
zinc
experienced a minimum point of -1.
Although
zinc
started as
being
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one with the lowest price at the beginning of the
year
, despite the fluctuation, it surpassed all other metals in December. When it comes to the monthly changes of copper, those remained relatively stable throughout the
year
,
however
, slightly dropping from 2 to 1.5. The metal started as being in between two other
prices
,
although
, during the period between June and the middle of October, it surpassed
nickel
and copper in
prices
before
zinc
took its place as a leader.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "although, however".
Vocabulary: Replace the words prices, nickel, zinc, year with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "change" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuate
  • volatile
  • stability
  • peak
  • trough
  • increment
  • decrement
  • steady
  • gradual
  • sharp
  • increase
  • decrease
  • month-on-month
  • average monthly change
  • commodity
  • benchmark
  • trend
  • precipitous
  • plateau
  • significant
  • marginal
  • surge
  • dip
  • plummet
  • soar
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