The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the monthly movements in change of
prices
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for copper,
nickel
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and
zinc
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in 2014.
Overall
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, it is evident that levels fluctuate throughout the
year
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, and the price of
nickel
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experienced the most dramatic decrease throughout the
year
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,
however
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, all the figures were around Noticeably, the
prices
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of
Nickel
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dropped significantly starting from Figure 6, which surpassed other metals and resulted in being the lowest
at the end
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of the
year
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with the variable of 1.
Moreover
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, the decline consisted of two bigger low points in June and October, of -3 and -2 respectively.
Similarly
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, in those months the
prices
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for
zinc
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experienced a minimum point of -1.
Although
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zinc
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started as
being
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one with the lowest price at the beginning of the
year
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, despite the fluctuation, it surpassed all other metals in December. When it comes to the monthly changes of copper, those remained relatively stable throughout the
year
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,
however
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, slightly dropping from 2 to 1.5. The metal started as being in between two other
prices
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,
although
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, during the period between June and the middle of October, it surpassed
nickel
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and copper in
prices
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before
zinc
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took its place as a leader.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "although, however".
Vocabulary: Replace the words prices, nickel, zinc, year with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "change" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuate
  • volatile
  • stability
  • peak
  • trough
  • increment
  • decrement
  • steady
  • gradual
  • sharp
  • increase
  • decrease
  • month-on-month
  • average monthly change
  • commodity
  • benchmark
  • trend
  • precipitous
  • plateau
  • significant
  • marginal
  • surge
  • dip
  • plummet
  • soar
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