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As countries develop, more and more people buy and use their own cars. Do you think the advantages of this trend for individuals outweibgh the disadvantages for the environment?

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Dear University Governor, Noise issue from new campus
restaurant
, affecting
residents
. Disrupts sleep and studying. I suggest: 1: Dialogue and Collaboration: Encouraging open communication between the university administration,
residents
, and the
restaurant
 management is of utmost importance. Regular meetings and discussions can facilitate the establishment of common ground and cooperation to find practical solutions, ensuring the needs of both the
residents
 and the
restaurant
 are met. 2: Compliance Monitoring: Regular monitoring of the
restaurant
's adherence to noise regulations is vital.
This
 can be achieved by conducting periodic checks and maintaining a robust feedback system to address any noise-related concerns raised by the
residents
. 3: Close The
restaurant
, call the sanitary and epidemiological station, hoping that they will find something there. Thank you. I hope you will do something. RAXIMBOYEV XUMOYUN.
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