Doctors, Nurses, and teachers make a great contribution to society and should be payed more than entertainment and sport celebrities. Do you agree or disagree ?

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prove to have a significant

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on

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the

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society

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but often do not

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receive

the pay that justifies

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their

value. I completely agree with the given statement, in my perspective

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feel,

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like

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nurses

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teachers

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are

increadibly

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incredibly

important when it

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to ensuring a steady development of a

nation

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. It is

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important to argue that the three

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stated above collectively are fundamental in producing human capital. A

nation

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is made of blocks , a strong

society

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requires a strong scaffolding and so to build one demands we give it the proper resources.

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tecahers

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teachers

not only

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us that but

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gifts

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us with a solid foundation where other disciplines get the chance to

manuever

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manoeuvre

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Doctors

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are at the frontier of health and medicine, they are responsible for maintaining community health, without them we would constantly worry about our health and

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have no aid to fight diseases. A nurse similar to a Doctor, are social

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that

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help

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us in our treatments and procedures, our contact with the nurse is a lot more direct and they usually work under the instruction of a professional doctor. A teacher is someone responsible for building

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brainpower of a

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, without

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we will

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forsake

logic and reasoning, we will begin

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arguing

on silly matters and our behaviours will be no different

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that of a

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chipmunk

. In order for a

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to thrive, we need the support of all three

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or else the

nation

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might crumble. Human capital

devlopement

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development

is another factor that marks the growth of a

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, it ensures that we produce citizens that

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genuinely

care about the

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and have a positive

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on the

society

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.

Doctors

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teachers

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are collectively

professions

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that have been proven to

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human

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capital of a

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both directly and indirectly. The

profesionals

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professionals

themselves are the result of human capital, but they can

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be seen as tokens that you can invest to raise human capital.

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doctors

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ensures

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that people are safe ,healthy and educated, all of which are

generic

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but highly important factor for development. In

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total

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professions

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are

higly

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highly

respective and valuable jobs and should

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recieve

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receive

the pay they rightfully deserve, as they are

resonsible

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responsible

for the steady development of a

nation

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but

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contribute to raising human capital.