The chart shows the average number of hours each day that Chinese, American, Turkish and Brazilian tourists spent doing leisure activities while on holiday in Greece in August 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words

The chart shows the average number of hours each day that Chinese, American, Turkish and Brazilian tourists spent doing leisure activities while on holiday in Greece in August 2019.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words
The chart gives information about how many
hours
foreign
tourists
from four distinct countries spent on three different kinds of leisure activities on average in Greece in August 2019.
Overall
,
it is clear that
reading books were most popular among Chinese and Americans,
while
Turkish and Brazilians enjoyed spending time at the beach the most. Plus, the
tourists
' least popular activity, regardless of their nationality, was going on excursions to different places. Looking at the chart more closely, holidaymakers from China read books for eight
hours
, double that of Turkish or Brazilian
tourists
. Meanwhile, Americans who enjoyed reading spent five
hours
on average. In terms of seaside activities, they were most popular among those from Brazil, who spent six
hours
at the beach during their summer holidays in Greece, precisely double that of Chinese
tourists
. Travellers from Turkey and the US spent five and four
hours
at the beach, respectively. They
also
enjoyed sightseeing for three
hours
on average,
while
Brazilian and Chinese people took part in
such
activities for only two
hours
and an hour, respectively.
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