It is better to live in a big city than a small town. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Migration to Metropolitan
cities
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not uncommon around the globe. There are people who argue that big
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are better to live
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to small towns. I
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tend to agree
to
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argument which I will explain in
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essay. Migration to Metropolitan
cities
are
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is
show examples
not uncommon around the globe. There are people who argue that big
cities
are better to live
comparing
Wrong verb form
in compared
show examples
to small towns. I
have
Unnecessary verb
apply
show examples
tend to agree
to
Change preposition
with
show examples
this
argument which I will explain in
this
essay.
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Make sure to clearly state your position in the introduction and conclusion.
coherence cohesion
Ensure that your essay has a clear logical structure and follows a cohesive flow throughout.
lexical resource
Expand your vocabulary by including more varied and precise language in your essay.
grammatical range
Pay attention to grammatical errors and strive for a wider range of sentence structures.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • urban sprawl
  • metropolitan
  • rural
  • cost of living
  • stress levels
  • unemployment rate
  • specialized fields
  • closer-knit community
  • cultural diversity
  • culinary experiences
  • recreational facilities
  • fast-paced lifestyle
  • pollution
  • overall well-being
  • social interactions
  • sense of community
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