The diagram shows the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on, above and below the surface of the Earth. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram shows the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on, above and below the surface of the Earth.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The illustration provides the
water
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cycle that moves continuously on, above, and under the
surface
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of the Earth.
Overall
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, it consists of a circular process from the
ocean
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, to the stratosphere, to the planet's
surface
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, and
then
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back to the
ocean
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.
To begin
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with, the
water
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from the
ocean
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evaporates into the sky with the help of the sun. The evaporated
water
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vapour
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condenses in the air and
subsequently
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forms clouds that contain
water
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vapour from the previous process. Those clouds will eventually change their forms to
water
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through a stage called precipitation and soak the land with rain. After that, the pouring rain will be received by the Earth's
surface
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to create lakes and diminish the
surface
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level from regions covered with snow. During the rain,
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the
surface
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runoff from regions covered with snow, the trees
also
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absorb the
water
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and create a stream of
water
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beneath the ground called groundwater. The groundwater
then
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enters the sea after a process called saltwater intrusion just before the
ocean
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.
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