The diagram shows the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on, above and below the surface of the Earth. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram shows the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on, above and below the surface of the Earth.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The illustration provides the
water
cycle that moves continuously on, above, and under the
surface
of the Earth.
Overall
, it consists of a circular process from the
ocean
, to the stratosphere, to the planet's
surface
, and
then
back to the
ocean
.
To begin
with, the
water
from the
ocean
evaporates into the sky with the help of the sun. The evaporated
water
vapour
then
condenses in the air and
subsequently
forms clouds that contain
water
vapour from the previous process. Those clouds will eventually change their forms to
water
through a stage called precipitation and soak the land with rain. After that, the pouring rain will be received by the Earth's
surface
to create lakes and diminish the
surface
level from regions covered with snow. During the rain,
besides
the
surface
runoff from regions covered with snow, the trees
also
absorb the
water
and create a stream of
water
beneath the ground called groundwater. The groundwater
then
enters the sea after a process called saltwater intrusion just before the
ocean
.
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