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The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph compares the contribution of transport, industry, total
air
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 pollutants and
housholds
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households
 in contaminating the clean
air
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 during the span of fifteen years,
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 from 1990 to 2005, in the UK. The values are expressed in
million
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tonnes
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.
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, it can be inferred that
presence
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the presence
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 of noxious particles in the
air
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 by various sources reduced considerably over the complete span except for transport. Total
air
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 pollutants stood highest in the graph
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 the lowest proportions were clocked for households. In 1990, around 5 and 7
million
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tonnes
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 of contaminants were produced by industry and total
air
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 pollutants, respectively.
Following
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, the values concerning both sectors declined considerably over the next decade before ending up at approximately 2 and 3
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tonnes
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 by the end of the timeline. At the beginning of
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the time
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 period, both households and transport generated about 1
million
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tonnes
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 of noxious
air
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 particles.
After
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, the former sector reduced its contribution to a sub-zero value and the latter experienced a slight incline to 1.5
million
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tonnes
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 by 2005.
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Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 2 times.
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