Today, many people do not know their neighbours in large cities. What problems does this cause? What can be done about this?
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1 - Introduction: In contemporary urban Use synonyms
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essay will examine the causes of Linking Words
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issue and propose a solution: the creation of shared Linking Words
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in the neighborhood. Use synonyms
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1 - Background statement: In bustling cities, neighborly Use synonyms
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have dwindled. Use synonyms
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2 - Detailed background statement: It's Use synonyms
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the frantic pace of modern Linking Words
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, leaving little time for neighborly interaction and a decreasing Use synonyms
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3 - Thesis: The Use synonyms
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of neighborly Use synonyms
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can create social problems, but it can be addressed by establishing shared Use synonyms
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in the Use synonyms
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essay will explore the causes in the first supporting Linking Words
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and discuss the solution of creating shared Use synonyms
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, concluding with the importance of building a stronger Use synonyms
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2 - First supporting Use synonyms
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: One of the main causes is the fast-paced city Use synonyms
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. The rapid tempo leaves people with little time for personal Use synonyms
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, as they often arrive home late, too exhausted for meaningful interactions. Use synonyms
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1 - Topic Use synonyms
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: Fast-paced urban Use synonyms
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significantly contributes to the Use synonyms
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2 - Example: In cities like Ho Chi Minh City, people adhere to hectic schedules, often arriving home late, leaving no energy for neighborly interactions. Use synonyms
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lifestyle hinders neighborly bonding and results in social isolation. Linking Words
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: The fast pace of urban Use synonyms
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3 - Second supporting Use synonyms
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: Another factor is the diminishing Use synonyms
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. Many prioritize personal interests over the collective good, leading to a reluctance to share with those around them, resulting in little interaction with Use synonyms
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1 - Topic Use synonyms
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: The fading Use synonyms
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of Use synonyms
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is a significant factor in the Use synonyms
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of neighborly Use synonyms
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2 - Example: In cities like Shanghai, self-centeredness leads to little interaction with Use synonyms
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erodes Linking Words
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bonds and leads to isolation. Use synonyms
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: A weakened Use synonyms
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in metropolitan areas is primarily Use synonyms
due to
the rapid lifestyle and a fading Linking Words
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community
. To address Use synonyms
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issue, creating shared Linking Words
spaces
within neighborhoods is crucial for fostering neighborly Use synonyms
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and stronger communities. Use synonyms
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1 - Summary: In summary, the Use synonyms
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fast-paced lives and diminishing Linking Words
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values. Use synonyms
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2 - Restatement of thesis: To solve Use synonyms
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problem, encouraging shared Linking Words
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within communities is vital. Use synonyms
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3 - Prediction or recommendation: Promoting and supporting the development of shared Use synonyms
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cohesion in urban areas.Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite