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The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart reveals the top three producing countries that exported
pineapple
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 in 2009 and 2010.
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, there is a pie chart that shows the
pineapple
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's cost to the
pineapple
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's consumer in a breakdown form.
Overall
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,
Country
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 A
succeed
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to increase
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in increasing
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 their export points in just ten years and hit the highest export at just over 10 million metric tonnes in 2019,
whereas
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 the distribution and retail had more than a third
percent
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per cent
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 in 2019.
On the other hand
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, it can be observed that the three countries had a competitive point each year in
pineapple
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 exports, but
Country
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C
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 almost hit the bottom out if compared with other countries.
Country
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C
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 hit no more than two million metric tons in 2009 and 2019. Meanwhile,
Country
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 B had moderate rates compared to
Country
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 A and
Country
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C
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, but
Country
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 B had a decreasing trend in 2019,
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Country
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 A and
Country
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C
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 experienced growth trends.
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At
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In
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 the end, trends of
pineapple
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 exports in each
country
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 depend on any point
such
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 as producer, export costs, international transport, licenses of import, profit, taxes, and distribution and retail.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words pineapple, country, c with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • charts
  • world pineapple exports
  • top three producing countries
  • 2009
  • 2019
  • breakdown
  • cost to the consumer
  • main features
  • comparison
  • relevant
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