The chart below shows The Japan Population by age groups starting in 1960 in including a forecast to 2040

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The line chart illustrates

Japan

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Japan's

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city population by age groups starting in 1960 and including

forecast

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the forecast

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to 2040.

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, the elderly population saw an increase

percentage

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in percentage

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while

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the population of younger and the middle

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apply

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decreased. The same trends are forecast

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for

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2040.

musa.nuwaTue Nov 07 2023

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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43 words

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The chart below shows The Japan Population by age groups starting in 1960 in including a forecast to 2040

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