The diagram shows the procedure for university entry for high school graduates. Write a report for a university or college lecturer describing the information. You should write at least 150 words.
The diagram illustrates the steps of
university
application
for a high school student.
First,
the graduates will need to complie
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compile
complete
documentations
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documentation
such
as their high school degree and the application
form, which can be downloaded from the university
's website, and send them to the school's admin. After 2 weeks, they will know if their application
is accepted, rejected or required to have more documentation.
If the application
is accepted, the students can move on with further
steps such
as select
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selecting
register
with the faculty's Dean Wrong verb form
registering
then
enter
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entering
university
.
In case they have the provisional acceptance but are required to have more documentation, the student will need to start the document compilation step again and send them to the Admin.
If the student is rejected, they can choose to complete the application
for an alternative course, send the documents to the university
and enroll
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Otherwise
, the application
will be canceled
.Change the spelling
cancelled
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