The diagram shows the procedure for university entry for high school graduates. Write a report for a university or college lecturer describing the information.

The diagram shows the procedure for university entry for high school graduates. Write a report for a university or college lecturer describing the information.
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The diagram illustrates the steps of
university
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application
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for a high school student.
First,
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the graduates will need to
complie
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compile
complete
the
documentations
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such
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as their high school degree and the
application
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form, which can be downloaded from the
university
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's website, and send them to the school's admin. After 2 weeks, they will know if their
application
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is accepted, rejected or required to have more documentation. If the
application
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is accepted, the students can move on with
further
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steps
such
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as
select
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the subjects,
register
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registering
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with the faculty's Dean
then
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enter
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the
university
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. In case they have the provisional acceptance but are required to have more documentation, the student will need to start the document compilation step again and send them to the Admin. If the student is rejected, they can choose to complete the
application
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for an alternative course, send the documents to the
university
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and
enroll
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again.
Otherwise
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, the
application
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will be
canceled
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cancelled
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words university, application with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • diagram
  • procedure
  • university entry
  • high school graduates
  • application process
  • admission requirements
  • selection criteria
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