The table and charts detailed below give information about the police budget in 2017 and 2018 in an area of Britain. The table illustrates where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed.
The table below provides
visual
representation of the origins of the funds, Add an article
a visual
while
the pie charts depict the manner in which it was allocated in 2017 and 2018 in a special area in Britain.
Overall
, the highest police budget source was prepared by national
government in both two years, Add an article
the national
a national
while
the total number of funds was more in 2018 by a narrow margin. The salaries of officers and staffs
ranked first in terms of money Fix the agreement mistake
staff
was
disbursed.
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According to
the table, the most significant amounts
of Fix the agreement mistake
amount
budget
was paid by Add an article
the budget
government
which was responsible for 175.5m and 177.8m in 2017 and 2018, respectively. There was little difference between the shares of other sources grants in 2017 and 2018, as the former was 38m, Add an article
the government
whereas
the amount of the latter was 0.5m higher.
The pie charts illustrate that salaries distribute considerable
amount of Add an article
the considerable
a considerable
budget
to themselves, which accounted for 75% and 69% in 2017 and 2018, respectively. Buildings and transport ranked second with a similar share of 17% in both years. Correct article usage
the budget
This
amount was almost twice as high as that of technology in 2017 (merely 8 percent
), Change the spelling
per cent
while
the share of money allocated to technology was 3% less in 2018 in this
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