You are not satisfied with many problems and with the changing room in a Sports Centre that you visit. Write a letter to the Sports Centre manager. In your letter Explain the problem Say how you feel about this problem What steps you would like manager to take.
Dear Thomas,
I am writing a
complain
regarding difficulties in the PC sports club.
When I joined your centre I was encountering troubles in your centre Replace the word
complaint
then
I decided to write a letter to inform you about the situation. Besides
this
, I changed my room due to
insufficient facilities in the said room. There is no locker to put my clothes and personal belongings in . However
, after the new room was provided the problem remained the same because the lockers were bad and I could not save my essential things.
However
, I faced the
difficulty in the swimming section the water was polluted with different materials and a funny smell came from it.
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Furthermore
, the ground area is also
not cleaned and its effect throughout the football game.
Moreover
, the café is given unhygienic food to the club members and last
time my stomach was upset so I left to eat from your cafeteria side.
I would like to suggest you please find a solution to these problems and giveus
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give us
gives
abetter
facility .
I want to give some tips to make your club more attractive to new people. You can buy new lockers or rectify them from a carpenter and Correct your spelling
a better
also
give instructions to the staff to clean the water and warm it during swimming time. You may also
check food through the food inspection team so contamination is eradicated. If you take these measurements in this
case people will not leave their memberships from your center.
I am looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.
Yours Sincerely,Submitted by mobinadurrani43 on
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Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.