The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbinton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The map depicts an industrial area and its future development plan in the town of Norbinton. It is clear from the map that almost all factories will be replaced with houses and facilities, and some road modifications.
According to
what is shown, on the Southern Linking Words
side
of the big square, a small roundabout will be added, and a medical Use synonyms
center
Change the spelling
centre
wil
be built beside that roundabout. on the Eastern Correct your spelling
will
side
of the main circle, 3 housing projects will be constructed, Use synonyms
in addition
to a school and a recreational area for children. Linking Words
While
on the Northern Linking Words
side
of that circle, a bridge will be Use synonyms
assembeled
to connect the Southern Correct your spelling
assembled
side
of the river to the Northern Use synonyms
side
of the river with a big resident. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, on the Western Linking Words
side
of the Use synonyms
roundabout
a fourth exit was paved with a couple of housing.
Add a comma
roundabout,
To sum up
, we could say that all of the factories were removed and replaced by facilities with some housing constructions.Linking Words
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