The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbinton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbinton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The map depicts an industrial area and its future development plan in the town of Norbinton. It is clear from the map that almost all factories will be replaced with houses and facilities, and some road modifications.
According to
what is shown, on the Southern
side
of the big square, a small roundabout will be added, and a medical
center
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centre
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wil
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will
be built beside that roundabout. on the Eastern
side
of the main circle, 3 housing projects will be constructed,
in addition
to a school and a recreational area for children.
While
on the Northern
side
of that circle, a bridge will be
assembeled
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assembled
to connect the Southern
side
of the river to the Northern
side
of the river with a big resident.
On the other hand
, on the Western
side
of the
roundabout
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roundabout,
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a fourth exit was paved with a couple of housing.
To sum up
, we could say that all of the factories were removed and replaced by facilities with some housing constructions.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • development
  • site
  • current
  • proposed
  • expand
  • facilities
  • factories
  • warehouses
  • roads
  • business park
  • airport
  • size
  • layout
  • comparisons
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