The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007
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The following graph demonstrates how much each person discharges carbon dioxide on average in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal in the 40-year period, between 1967 and 2007. As a whole, The United Kingdom tops the graph despite its decreasing trend. The second one on top is Sweden which has some fluctuations. Italy and Portugal had low emissions but their trend is rising. The United Kingdom’s amount of carbon dioxide production was more than 10
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in 1967, and it dropped steadily through the years, and at
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reached about 9 metric
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, in 2007. Sweden’s procedure was not stable. It started out with more than 8
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in 1967 and reached its peak in 1977 with more than 10
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, the rate fell sharply to less than 8
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in 1987, and the decrease continued gradually till 2007. Italy’s amount was more than 4
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in 1967 and rose steadily and got to its summit in 2007. The lowest amount belongs to Portugal with less than 2metric
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in 1967 and more than 4
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in 2007, which in
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year coincides with Sweden.
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  • carbon dioxide emissions
  • per person
  • United Kingdom
  • Sweden
  • Italy
  • Portugal
  • graph
  • compare
  • average
  • increase
  • decrease
  • trend
  • peak
  • decline
  • years
  • period
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