The only way to reduce the amount of traffic in cities today is by reducing the need for people to travel from home or work, education or shopping. To what extent do you agree or disagree?v

Nowadays, the crowded megacities and

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congestion in them

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become a big problem for citizens to deal with. Some experts believe

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fewer individuals utilize

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vehicles for their daily routine the freer spaces would be on

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there are a few problems with the approach, I will explain why I agree with the solution. The human population is growing

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a high rate globally.

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, the demand for more shopping

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and

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and education facilities is rising. With

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more cars and

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vehicles available compared to previous decades, people are getting used to

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way of

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an unstoppable rate.

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, the streets would always be busy and crowded.

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, many social experts suggest that if it

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not

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mass car production, cities would definitely be

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and less congested. By expanding digital ways of communication and transportation, humans could enter a new era in which except for necessary situations nobody would look for

transport

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vehicles.

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, online shopping in many developed countries has significantly decreased the tendency of individuals to buy

stuffs

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in person.

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, there is

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need

for going

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outside of

home

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and using cars or busses.

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, ambulances and police personnel could easily move and do their duties as fast as possible in a

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space.

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, there are other ways which should be considered too.

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, developing new facilities for transportation which use other passes like Tunnels and even airborne taxis could be effective too.

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, Elon Musk,

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well-known entrepreneur is working on underground tunnels and fast railways in Los Angeles City in order to overcome the immense

traffic

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of the city. In

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peoples

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people

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in many cities all around the world are suffering from

traffic

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and the issue is growing

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every day. From my perspective, investing in new ways of communication and transportation between humans combined with developing advanced and different routes for

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could solve the

traffic

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issue

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forever.