The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habitats in five Australian cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habitats in five Australian cities.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graphic chart illustrates the outcomes of research regarding the number of people who bought or consumed
coffee
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or tea in five towns in Australia.
Overall
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, it can be seen that most of the men and women in every city preferred to drink their tea or caffeine drink in a
coffee
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shop during the past four weeks
instead
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of buying it for domestic usage. Another thing is that the majority of residents, who bought their drinks for their homes, chose to buy instant
coffee
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instead
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of fresh one and none of them purchased tea. Over the
last
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month, a large percentage of citizens decided to take their drinks in cafes with the highest numbers in Melbourne and Hobart, reaching around 63% of their local residents, followed by Sydney with just above 60% of its population. Hobart had the highest percentage of people that bought instant
coffee
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(slightly under 55%),
in contrast
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with Sydney where
this
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proportion was the lowest among all other towns with 45% of the residents.
However
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, again
from
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of
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all the towns, the citizens of Sydney were the ones with the highest rate of fresh
coffee
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purchases (around 44%).
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "instead".
Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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