It is better to buy just a few expensive clothes, rather than lots of cheaper ones. Do you agree or disagree?
there are some factors for
buy
expensive Change the verb form
buying
clothes
or cheap clothes
and each other have many reasons for buy. I believe that expensive clothes
can better
rather than cheaper Add a missing verb
be better
clothes
.
On the one side, buying expensive clothes
have
two achievements. One of the primary arguments for buying a few expensive Correct subject-verb agreement
has
clothes
are
the quality material and durability that often comes with higher-priced items. Change the verb form
is
This
means that you may end up spending less money in the long run, as you won't have to replace your clothes
as often. Another Argument is related to style and fashion. Because, it is often associated with high-end designers and luxury brands, which can offer unique and trend-setting designs.
On the other side, buying more cheap clothes
depends on two arguments. First,
Cost is very important. Because,
a few costs Remove the comma
apply
for made
these Change preposition
to make
clothes
and
Correct word choice
apply
producer
can produce a lot of Fix the agreement mistake
producers
clothes
and consumer
can buy Fix the agreement mistake
consumers
different
several cheap Correct word choice
apply
clothes
. Second,
the production of any clothing has an environmental impact. I saw a documentary about it that in recent years, there has been a growing awareness of the ethical and environmental implications of clothing production. cheap clothing does
not from reputable brands may not adhere to higher ethical and environmental standards, Unnecessary verb
apply
such
as fair labor
practices and sustainable sourcing.
In conclusion, it is better to buy just a few expensive Change the spelling
labour
clothes
or lots of cheaper ones depends
on your personal values and circumstances. If you prioritize quality, fashion, and design, it may make sense to invest in more expensive Wrong verb form
depending
clothes
. However
, Cost and environmental impact have most
effect Add an article
the most
for buy
cheaper Change preposition
on buying
clothes
. Ultimately, the most important thing is to buy clothes
that you love and that make you feel good.Submitted by lavasania49 on
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