Medical professionals such as doctors or nurses from poorer countries often migrate to richer countries to work. What problems arise from this situation? What measures can be taken to deal with it?

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Brain drain
Healthcare sector
Workload
Cultural barriers
Economic implications
Quality of care
Mortality rates
Incentivize
Remuneration
International agreements
Infrastructure
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Medical professionals such as doctors or nurses from poorer countries often migrate to richer countries to work. What problems arise from this situation? What measures can be taken to deal with it?

Fully explain your ideas

The internet isolates us and encourages people not to socialise. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people believe that non academic subjects should be removed from the syllabus so that children can concentrate only on academics. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Christ offers light to our lives. Think about areas in your own lives that need more light.

Improvement in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations. However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the poorer nations in such areas. To what extent do you agree?

Some people say in order to prevent illness and disease, govenments should focus on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems. To what extend do you agree or disagree?