You are not satisfied with many problems and with the changing room in a Sports Centre that you visit. Write a letter to the Sports Centre manager. In your letter Explain the problem Say how you feel about this problem What steps you would like manager to take.

Hello Manager, I have noticed the sports centre changing
room
and I would like to highlight a few things that I
had
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observed. First of all, the main problem in my point of view it's the space
room
that
smaller
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than the old
room
, another issue
it's
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is
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dripping water from the roof is a wet
room
and of course with
this
issue the stink smell of the
room
, with
this
trouble the wall it's peeling and for it is creating dust in all
room
. It seems like no one is taking care of
this
room
properly and I would like to inform you that we were transferred to
this
new
room
because could be a good thing for us
such
as be most close to the court sports and we can receive more equipment for our students in sports centre that's the main reason we have been chosen
this
room
.
Furthermore
, we have to reorganise
this
situation to clean up the
room
and bring a new perspective that we are taking care of what was passed on to us, I have to remind you that the border team will be verifying what are we doing with the
room
, types of equipment, how we are teaching the students. So, in any situation that
displease
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the border
team
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team,
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the budget that they give to us will be reduced. We have to act right now and not situations like that harm us. Sincerely, Team member.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • unsanitary
  • unpleasant
  • frustrating
  • substandard
  • unacceptable
  • disappointing
  • inconvenient
  • unhygienic
  • maintenance
  • cleaning
  • facilities
  • outdated
  • repair
  • shortage
  • lockers
  • benches
  • showers
  • functioning
  • staff
  • unhelpful
  • impolite
  • privacy partitions
  • ventilation
  • smell
  • lighting
  • inspections
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