Task 1 The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
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The bar
char
displays information about production and Correct your spelling
chart
Use synonyms
consuption
of Correct your spelling
consumption
electricity
in 2014 for peak ten countries. Calibration of Use synonyms
electricity
done in Use synonyms
billion
Use synonyms
Use synonyms
KWh
.
Fix capitalization
kWh
Overall
, Linking Words
China
is the main producer of Use synonyms
electricity
and Korea, Rep is the Use synonyms
miner
producer. Replace the word
mining
Rest
of Correct article usage
The rest
other
countries Correct article usage
the other
are fluctuating
Wrong verb form
fluctuate
in
between the said two countries. Change preposition
apply
However
, the US Linking Words
obtain
Wrong verb form
obtained
Correct article usage
the seconf
seconf
major Correct your spelling
second
genrator
of Correct your spelling
generator
the
electrical power. Correct article usage
apply
As well as
Linking Words
,
Remove the comma
apply
consumption
of Correct article usage
the consumption
electricity
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also
Linking Words
show
the same Correct subject-verb agreement
shows
behavior
. Change the spelling
behaviour
Accordingly
, Linking Words
China
and the US are the Use synonyms
top
main consumers of generated electrical power.
Correct word choice
apply
To begin
with, the maximum generation is 5.398 Linking Words
billion
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KWh
in Fix capitalization
kWh
China
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while
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United
Correct article usage
the United
States
responsible for 4,099 Add a verb
States is
States was
billion
Use synonyms
KWh
. The same Use synonyms
insident
can be observed for Correct your spelling
incident
Use synonyms
Correct article usage
the consuption
consuption
of electrical energy. Correct your spelling
consumption
Because
Correct word choice
apply
China
consumes 5.322 Use synonyms
billion
Use synonyms
KWh
and Use synonyms
United
States Correct article usage
the United
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consuption
was 3,866 Correct your spelling
consumption
billion
Use synonyms
KWh
. Among those ten Use synonyms
contries
, Correct your spelling
countries
Korea
Rep. Change noun form
Korea's
was showing
the least Wrong verb form
showed
Use synonyms
consuption
and production.
The graph obviously Correct your spelling
consumption
providing
the details of Wrong verb form
provides
main
ten Correct article usage
the main
contries
Change noun form
contries'
behavior
of energy usage and production in 2014.Change the spelling
behaviour
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words consuption, electricity, billion, kwh, china with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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