The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graphs show the origins of police financial accounts for 2017 until 2018 in a certain area of Britain and illustrate its expenditures.
Overall
, the sources of the budget came from three
different big sources, with a rise in the amount
in 2018. Furthermore
, the budget was used to be spent on three
aspects as can be seen over the period of time.
The financial account of the police showed three
entities being the origins of income. The income gradually rose from 304.7m in 2017 to 318.6m in 2018. While
the highest amount
of earnings came from the national government both
in 2017 and 2018, marking over 175.5m, the lowest earnings came from other sources with only ~38m in both
years. In addition
, the local taxes, as the second highest earnings, had the most significant addition compared to the previous year, adding 11.3m.
The money from the three
origins was spent by the police on three
particular posts, prioritizing salaries as the main outcome. The amount
of money spent on salaries declined by 6% in 2018. However
, despite it being declining, it was still the biggest expense of both
years. While
the amount
of expense in terms of technology increased to 14% in 2018, the expense on buildings and transports stayed the same at 17% both
in 2017 and 2018.Submitted by fylerone on
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