The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given chart compares the
literation
standard of 6 regions by gender over the Use synonyms
last
year period.
It can be clearly seen that men are more educated than women across the surveyed regions Linking Words
whereas
the highest illiterateness percentage happened in South Asia.
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Initially
, the developed countries are being accepted as the most educated regions proven by the highest Linking Words
literation
capacity with nearly 0% illiteracy level during the previous year. Use synonyms
This
achievement is followed by Caribbean nations with a 10% uneducated rate and only a slight difference between males and females. Linking Words
In addition
, the Oceania region performed less than 20% of insufficient Linking Words
literation
on average by gender.
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Besides
, the other 3 territories are considered as the less-educated zone by performing a higher illiterateness rate over the Linking Words
last
12 months. Linking Words
Accordingly
, the women in Sub-Saharan Africa measured nearly 50% of the under-qualified literacy standard with a 10% lower difference compared to the males. Linking Words
Similarly
, the Arab States show a slightly higher rate of illiteracy level Linking Words
while
the highest remarks of insufficient Linking Words
literation
are owned by South Asia Use synonyms
territory
.Fix the agreement mistake
territories
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