Accidents are common on roads. What are the causes of this problem? Can you speculate the effects of this phenomenon and how could the frequency of accidents be reduced?
Recently,
accidents
happen
a lot on the street and Wrong verb form
have happened
people
are suffering from the possibility of accidents
becomes increasing
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This
essay discusses about
the reasons Remove the preposition
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of
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for
accidents
and ways to reduce the rates of accidents
.
To commence with, this
circumstance originated from the fact that the process of getting a driver
license is too easy. In Korea, the rate of passing the Change noun form
driver's
test
is almost 97 per cent. It followed that drivers don’t have proper
expertise and skills which are essential for driving. Correct article usage
the proper
Moreover
, the transportation system is lax that
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and
people
don’t seriously consider breaking a law. In other words
, the public easily break
the laws Change the verb form
breaks
such
as following the traffic lights,
and diminishing the speed when they are in a busy situation.
To reduce Remove the comma
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accidents
, I would assert two solutions. First and foremost, the government should make complicated test
. To pass the exam, drivers should be educated precisely about the safety of Fix the agreement mistake
tests
transportations
, and Fix the agreement mistake
transportation
practiced
hard Wrong verb form
practice
about
driving and parking skills. When Change preposition
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people
notice about
how driving can Change preposition
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make
dangerous and unexpected situations, they can be more keen about driving. Verb problem
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Secondly
, establishing strong punishment
is essential. One of the reasons people
break the law easily is that they do
not afraid of weak Verb problem
are
punishment
. If the government fine much, people
would
follow it and violators will not repeat the same behaviour. Wrong verb form
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For example
, Singapore is well-known about
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for
their
strong Correct pronoun usage
its
punishment
and the rates of accidents
are low compared to other countries.
In conclusion, the lax of
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driver
license Change noun form
driver's
test
and Fix the agreement mistake
tests
weak
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the weak
punishment
of
breaking Change preposition
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the rule
rule
of transportation made Fix the agreement mistake
rules
accidents
are
common on the street. Unnecessary verb
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Therefore
, if the government adjusts the system and test
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tests
of
driving the rates will be reduced in the future.Change preposition
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