The pie charts below show the proportion of carbohydrates, protein and fat in three different diets. Summarize the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show the proportion of carbohydrates, protein and fat in three different diets. Summarize the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The pie charts below show the proportion of carbohydrates, protein and fat in three different diets. Summarize the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The charts illustrate the
percentage
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of macronutrients in the average
diet
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, the healthy
diet
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and the healthy
diet
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for
sport
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.
Overall
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, the cellulose is the highest rate in both healthy diets.
While
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the fat proportion is the lowest among the protein and glucose proportion in all provided diets.
Additionally
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, in the average
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diet
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diet,
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both sugar and
protien
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protein
have the same bonus.
The cellulose
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Cellulose
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is the highest interest in the healthy
diet
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and the healthy
diet
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for
sport
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with 50% and 60% respectively. In the same two healthy
diets
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diets,
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the protein
percentage
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is higher in the general healthy
diet
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with
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at
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30%
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while
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and
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25% for the
sport
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.
Moreover
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, the fat
percentage
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in the healthy
diet
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for
sport
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is lower than the general healthy
diet
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with 15% and 20% respectively. In the average
diet
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, the only
diet
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that
have
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has
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both
protien
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protein
and carbohydrates
share
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shares
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the same proportion
with
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of
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40% each.
However
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, the remaining
percentage
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is fat with 20%.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, diet, sport with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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