The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweeden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The line chart represents information about the
percentage
of carbon dioxide emissions per person in four countries called England, Sweeden
, Italy and Portugal in Correct your spelling
Sweden
years
1957 and 2007.
Correct article usage
the years
Overall
, it can be seen that the United Kingdom was the highest nation that released, but the lowest was Portugal.
To begin
with, in the United Kingdom, the proportion was stable between 1967 and 1977 at about 11 per cent. And between 1977 and 2007, the average was sharply declining from 11 per cent to 9%. Followed by Sweden, the highest percentage
was in 1977 at 11 per cent and then
the average was down. In addition
, in Italy the average was increasing
between 1967 to 1997 about 5% to 7% Wrong verb form
increased
then
the total was
not Verb problem
did
changing
.
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change
On the other hand
, in Portugal, the percentage
was highly risen from 1967 to 1997 about 1% to 5 %. In contrast
, the percentage
was
stabled Unnecessary verb
apply
in
1997 to 2007 accounted for 5%Change preposition
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