The bar chart provides information about how families in a country spent weekly income in both 1968 and in 2018.

The bar chart illustrates the average weekly money used by families in the

year

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1968 and 2018. Looking from

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overall

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an overall

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perspective, it is readily apparent that most of

spending

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the spending

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was

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dropped,

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the remaining

were

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rose. The difference in

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the amount

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of spending varied most in food,

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household goods remained unchanged. In 1968, food was spent most with 35% of families income before

dropped

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to above 15% in 2018.

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fuel and power were the lowest spend with above 5% and decrease to below 5% in the next 50 years. Personal goods (over 5%), and fuel and power (nearly 5%)

were

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declined to below 5%

both

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.

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, 10% of housing

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spent in 1968 which was half used in 2018. In terms of transport and

leisure

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both were just below 10% and

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rose to approximately 15% and more than 20%, respectively in 2018.

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the other hand, household goods were unaltered at just above 5%.