The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.
The given two bar charts give information about
UK
graduates and master's degree Correct pronoun usage
what UK
students
did after graduation (excluding full time-work) in 2008.
Overall
, it can be seen that most of the undergraduate and postgraduate students
decided to continue higher education,
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apply
while
taking a part-time job and becoming unemployed had similar figures. However
, joining volunteer activities was the last
option for the graduates.
Continuing higher education was the first option for students
in both degrees since the number was the highest compared to others. There were almost 30.000 undergraduate students
and 2,725 master's degree students
who were continuing their studies. Moreover
, 17,735 undergraduate students
took part-time jobs that the number was higher than postgraduate learners which was 2,535.
Looking back at the graph, it is clear that
there was a huge gap number in the unemployment group between both degrees. There were 16,000 undergraduates, whereas
the other ones were 1,625. On the other hand
, joining volunteer activity had the lowest figure in both types of students
. There were only 3,500 undergraduates and no more than 400 postgraduates.Submitted by musa.nuwa on
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