The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.
The two bar charts illustrate the number of UK graduate and postgraduate
students
who avoided to take
full-time Change the verb form
taking
work
after finishing university in 2008.
Overall
, it is clearly seen that both graduate and post graduate
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post-graduate
students
tended to go to part time
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part-time
work
and continued
their Wrong verb form
continue
study
. Meanwhile, Voluntary Fix the agreement mistake
studies
work
was the least destination to work
in.
Looking into details, the figure for undergraduate learners went
to pursue their education, there Correct pronoun usage
who went
was
over Change the verb form
were
than
29 Change preposition
apply
thousand
people. It was followed by part-time work
with above 17 thousand
. Furthermore
, there were more than 16 thousand
of them who could not find jobs. In contrast
, only under 3,500 decided to engage in volunteering activities.
Moreover
, for the postgraduate students
, both continuing study and taking part time
jobs were the popular destination, with approximately 28 Add a hyphen
part-time
thousand
and about 2,600 respectively. Likewise
, over 1,600 of them considered
to be unemployed. Add a missing verb
are considered
However
, volunteering was the least popular to go
, Correct your spelling
do
accounted
for just 345 Wrong verb form
accounting
students
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words students, work, thousand with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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