The two maps below show the changes that have taken place in the town of Westley since 1815. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The two maps below display the developments of the Westley, which have been done over two centuries.

Overall

, in those years, the town has transformed from a rural area with agricultural and forest areas into an urban area with a sound transportation system.

Firstly

, it is clearly seen that a railway station and a cinema hall have been built in the lower left area after removing the fields.

Also

, the Twine Toll Bridge, with its connected road, has been demolished to make way for a new railroad connecting that station.

In addition

, the road has been extended towards the lower portion, and the Linton woods, previously located in the centre of the town, have been chopped down and replaced by a new housing estate.

Moreover

, Lord Westley's House has been converted into a commercial-residential place.

Furthermore

, the authority has built a sports centre with a museum and a shopping centre in the place of the Coach Inn and the Church, respectively. Other mentionable developments were the extension of the residential facilities by developing a new business space

along with

it and the building of a new commercial zone on the bottom side of the plan.

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