Many things that used to br done in the home by hands are now being done by machines. Does the development bring more advantages or disadvantages?

In today’s day, cutting-edge technologies are replacing

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manual

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doing household chores by

hands

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have

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a huge advantage when it comes to the quality of the

work

,

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think contemporary machines have more benefits than

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drawbacks for

majority

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of reasons. On the one

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, smart devices have enough adverse effects

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human beings.

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, they are so expensive to buy that lots of people may not afford to themselves. An average salary may not be enough to acquire them, as

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cost

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theirs

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are soaring day by day.

Secondly

,

such

devices use

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electricity.

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, it is simply impossible to use microwave ovens, vacuum cleaners or washing machines without electricity.

Finally

, smart technologies sometimes have noise that may cause

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destruction to

neighbors

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or even take up lots of

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, lack of space might cause

unconvinience

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inconvenience

to move.

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hand

,

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would argue that the benefits of technologies that replace

hand

work

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outweigh the drawbacks. Primarily, as they are easy to utilize, residents strike to acquire them, even

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cost incredibly high. Faster

work

completion comes as the next advantage. People finish their housework twice

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quicker

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in comparison to

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them

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by

hand

.

Consequently

, they would have much time for

laisure

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leisure

activities or even for self-development. The

last

, but not the least benefit of using them in daily life is that they are helpful for women who

work

. As working females are prone to fatigue, by using

such

developments they obviously have less tiredness or other health problems. In conclusion,

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think that even if there are relevant reasons not to use them, it would be beneficial

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them

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daily life, as they have more benefits rather than drawbacks.