The pie charts below show the proportion of carbohydrates, protein and fat in three different diets. Summarize the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given three pie charts provide information
of
sharing the nutrients in distinct foods. Change preposition
on
Overall
, carbohydrate
contributed most to the food contents, and Fix the agreement mistake
carbohydrates
the
fat made up the smallest part of the chart as the nutrition.
First of all, the feature Correct article usage
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intersect
into three parts it was consist of average Change the verb form
intersects
diet
, healthy diet
, and healthy diet
for sport. Each of
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apply
diet
content has three type
of Change to a plural noun
types
nutritions
, Fix the agreement mistake
nutrition
such
as, carbohydrates, protein
, and fat. As it
can be seen, carbohydrates substantially dominated all the Correct pronoun usage
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diet
categories followed by protein
at
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in
the
second place, Correct article usage
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however
, carbohydrates turn significantly into essentials nutrition, which is accounted for 80% of healthy
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a healthy
diet
for sport
, Fix the agreement mistake
sports
in contrast
, the protein
in healthy
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a healthy
diet
for sport
turns into Add an article
a sport
smallest
number of needed if compared with Add an article
the smallest
protein
in other contents, such
as,
average Remove the comma
apply
diet
andhealthy
Correct your spelling
and healthy
diet
.
On the other hand
, the
fat was the least significant part of the Correct article usage
apply
diet
, which is
made up 15% & Unnecessary verb
apply
20
% of nutrition in the Correct word choice
and 20
diet
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